Wednesday, March 23, 2011

William's dialogue

As William is relatively new to this school so I will be posting his dialogue on my blog as he doesn't have a blog of his own.



William 
Draft 1
Cliente: Hola.

 asistente de compras: Hola. Buenos días. Como estas

- Bien gracias. Me gustaría uno pantalones cortos, dos camisetas mangas cortas y uno vestidos y botas marrones de cuero por favor.

- Un momento....... Uno pantalones cortos, dos camisetas de manga corta, dos vestido y botas de marrones de cuero.

- No no no dos chaqueta azules por favor.

- Un momento..... dos chaqueta azules.

- No no no dos marrones de cuero.

- Un momento...... DOS MARRONES DE CUERO.

- No no no uno camiseta negra de manga corta.

- UN MOMENTO….UNA CAMISETA NEGRA DE MANGA CORTA.

-          Este pantalones es el más cómodo pero demasiado grande.

-          Ok 

-         ¿Cuánto cuesta ?

-         Pantalones €200, dos camisetas mangas cortas €250, uno vestido €200 y uno botas marrones de cuero €150

- Demasiado caro. Adiós.

1 comment:

  1. William, the dialog is good, especially because you just started.
    But some of the un, una, unos, unas are wrong.
    eg. uno pantalones (unos pantalones)
    uno vestidos (unos vestidos)
    pantalones es $200 (pantalones son $200)

    There are more, so check that one more time.

    Maybe you can also change "costumer" and "shop assistent" to spanish, and change the - in front of every sentence to the name, or a short version of the name, so we don't get confused about who is speaking

    Very good, Emma

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